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gorgeous, esther

totally captures the day

the serenity [not without a slight anxiety about writing the next one]

the porch

the colors

the generation[s] after/next

thank you,

jfi

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I feel a mood conveyed. But also I have read more evocative poems of yours.

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Wonderful! Totally evocative of summer’s essence.

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Belongs in a book. With more.

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So perfectly beautiful

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