Part One:
Hi Esther,
I hope this message finds you well. I'm following up on the previous email I sent about the range of franchise opportunities I'm currently representing. We're keen on identifying potential entrepreneurs in New York, and your professional background at 1199 SEIU caught my attention.
Let me know if you’d like to explore further.
Thank you,
Jeff
Senior Franchise Consultant | FranChoicePart Two
Hi Esther,
What’s taking you so long?
Jeff
No chocolate? No deal.
I like his second letter! I may copy it to send to several people, including myself.