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Ahava came back from
a one week sleepover with her friend
Deva. They were on Sag Harbor
at Deva’s grandparents house.
What were the grandparents like
I asked. The grandmother has
a lot more sagging skin on her neck than you.
Ahava said. They eat at a kitchen
table not on a big table.
And every day they eat soup because
of Deva’s grandmother’s teeth. I don’t
like soup she said. But we had fun.
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